Koromaru pencil pic

Drew this pic of the only persona character I really know and have pictures of and it is ( コロマル ) KOROMARU ~Kawaii desu~

I love this little doggie so much hehehehe.

I will hopefully ink and colour this in for a competion I saw on TC-CHANS page. [link] Something about a persona 3 artwork competion.

But I am not quite sure if this pic of little Koro chan is good enough for the comp.

What do you think guys?

Art work (c) copyrighted to Me!!!!
Character Koromaru (c) copyrighted to persona3 Atlus